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Give me a sunset in a cup,and I'll give you my heart
We'll be together forever, if you say you love me, but if you don't I must depart
You say you love me, but is it true?
Can our love still stand, though you're across the ocean blue?
You say our love can stand the test of time,
though I'm poor are you after my every dime?
You say you would give me everything even the shirt off your back?
Really? Would you give me your gold filled sack?
You say I'm your star shining bright,
you can never be perfect as me, but have you used all your might?
You say you love me, but words don't mean a thing
unless you back it up with a ring
You say you love me 'till death do we part'
How long will it be till I'm dead in your heart
You say your love for me can only get stronger,
but I don't know if I can stand you any longer
You say you'll always be mine
Was that all a pick-up line
You say our love is never ending
Frankly, my dear, I don't remember it beginning
You say with our love the fat lady never sings
Will it be over if her cell phone rings?
You say all these things but do you mean them?
so...I'll say....
Give me a sunset in a cup, and I'll give you my heart
We'll be together for ever, if you say you love me, but if you don't I must depart
This poem was inspired by the ups and down of all long term relationships. I hope you liked it!
love,peace, and music of the soul!